Monday, September 22, 2008

Learning can do better

Learning can do better.

I walk down the street.
There is a hole.
I don't see it.
I fall in.
It isn't my fault.
It takes a very long time to get out.

I walk down the same street.
There is still a deep hole.
I pretend not to see it.
I fall in.
I pretend it's still not my fault.
It takes a long time to get out.

I walk down the same street.
There is still the same deep hole.
I see it.
I fall in anyway.
It's a habit.
I get out quicker this time.

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole.
I see it.
I walk around it.
I don't fall in.

Then, I walk down a different street.

5 comments:

chroneicon said...

astig, nice poem papa...

es said...

good thoughts!:)

billy yow well said...

@ chie
salamat papa..actually di ako nakikinig sa reviewer ko nian..

@april
its the thought that count:D pero salamat..

PoPoY said...

bakit ang hilig nyo sa tula.

billy, kantahan na lang!!! hahaha

Unknown said...

brilliant... :) absolutely brilliant... :)